A better KK movie
I'd have to say that this is a fairly strange submission. You've got some style down pat, but a handful of poorly-drawn characters really brought it down. Remember, any artist is only as good as his worst painting, spending a lot of time on some things is not good if you are neglecting the others!
I'm still confused as to why you collaborate to churn out so many animations, great submissions come by skill and not chance.
This, of course, is coming from a man with no Flash Mx experience and should probably be ingored.
I don't have any Flash MX experience either... I got flash 8 experience though.
This was a collab?
I found it kind of strange that a collaboration was needed for this. Spend a little bit more time on your animations and maybe you'd get a higher score.
Just not good...
The Good: Nice concept. I will always hold an appreciation for the ironically macrabe, and this Stick Death brings me just that. The song was pretty good, but unless you composed it yourself I can't credit you with that.
The Bad: I almost saw the ending coming. It was all too predictable, and the name of "The Project" could more appropriately be called "Aah! Grenade!"
The Ugly: The animation was choppy. You tried to create a unique style with the text bubbles (showing an exclamation point and a grenade instead of text), however, this style was inconsistent and made the movie awkward. I also noticed you have some rather cliche Anime-style expressions, such as "Giant-Sweat-Drop" and "Painfully-Overused-(-_-)-Emoticon".
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